Personal Statement review

Crafting a strong personal statement is key to a successful university application. Our Personal Statement Review Service provides in-depth feedback to help you sharpen your writing and present your interests and experience in the most compelling way. We focus on helping your unique strengths and motivations come through clearly in your statement, so admissions teams see exactly why you’re a great candidate for the course.

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Submit Your Personal Statement - £35

What’s Included in Your Application Review

Comments

You’ll receive line-by-line comprehensive, in-text comments directly on your personal statement, highlighting areas of strength and opportunities for improvement.

Clarity

We’ll assess how clearly your ideas are presented, whether your tone is appropriate, and identify any grammatical issues or awkward phrasing that could weaken your personal statement.

SUGGESTIONS

You'll receive targeted suggestions to better express why you’re applying to the course, what drives you, and how your academic and personal experiences demonstrate that you’re an ideal candidate for the course.

Alignment

We’ll help you align your personal statement with the expectations of your specific course, making sure it's relevant, focused, and persuasive to the admissions team.

TURNAROUND

Your reviewed personal statement will be returned to you within 5 business days, ready for you to make any edits.

HOW THE APPLICATION REVIEW WORKS

01.

Submit Your Statement:

Complete the form below with your details and upload your personal statement as a Word Document for review.

02.

We Review It:

We’ll go through your statement, leaving comments in the margins with actionable suggestions and using tracked changes (redlining) so you can clearly see edits to wording, structure, and grammar.

03.

Receive Feedback:

You’ll receive your edited Word document by email within 5 business days, complete with tracked changes and comments. We’ll also include a general overview highlighting what’s working well and what could be improved to make your statement even stronger.

04.

Refine with Confidence:

Use our guidance to edit and finalise a polished, compelling personal statement. If you need further support after making edits, you can submit your statement for review again by making another purchase.

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Why Choose Our Personal Statement Review service?

Your personal statement is one of the most important parts of your university application. It’s your chance to show who you are beyond your grades, by showing your interests, your goals, and what makes you stand out.

✅ A Simple, Stress-Free Way to Get Expert Feedback

We know you’re juggling revision, schoolwork, and application deadlines. That’s why we’ve made our

service as easy and straightforward as possible.

Unlike other companies that ask you to book a consultation, we keep things transparent, fast, and easy to use. Just send us your personal statement, and we’ll take care of the rest.

👀 Why Getting Feedback Matters

Having someone else look over your statement is essential. You need a fresh pair of eyes to:

Catch things you might miss,

Help you explain your experiences more clearly,

And make sure your statement flows and stands out.

Whether you’ve already had feedback from teachers or friends, or none at all, we can complement any advice you've received, or be the first stop in improving your statement.

🎓 Our Experience: We've Been There

We’re not just giving generic advice. We’ve been through the uni application process ourselves and succeeded.

One of our co-founders was accepted into Oxford University, and her personal statement played a key role in that offer. She knows exactly how to write a statement that gets noticed by top universities.

Our other co-founder received offers from all five of her university choices, including the Russell Group university, Queen Mary University of London. She understands how to tailor a strong statement across a range of courses and institutions.

Together, we’ve reviewed many personal statements

and know how to help yours shine.

🌟 What You’ll Get

A full line-by-line review of your personal statement

Comments and tracked edits directly on your Word document

A summary of what you’re doing well and what could be improved

All sent to you within 5 working days, straight to your inbox

We’re here to support you at one of the most important points in your academic journey, and we’ll make it as clear, useful, and stress-free as possible.

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FREQUENTLY ASKED QUESTIONS (FAQS)

Frequently Asked Questions

This service is for anyone applying to any course at any university, whether that’s Oxbridge, a Russell Group university, or any other institution.

Whether you’ve already received lots of feedback and want a fresh perspective, or you haven’t had anyone look over your personal statement yet, this service is for you.

We’ll help you take your statement to the next level, wherever you are in the process.

You upload your personal statement as a Word document and make the payment.

We carefully go through your statement and:
- Leave comments in the margins with tips and suggestions,
- Use tracked changes (also called “red-lining”) so you can clearly see any edits we make to your wording, grammar, or structure. You’ll be able to go through each change and choose to accept or reject them, so you stay in control of your final draft.

Once we’ve finished, we’ll email the edited Word document back to you using the email address you gave us. The email will include the reviewed Word Document as well as a short overall summary which lets you know what you're doing well and what can be improved.

APPLICATION REVIEW (PERSONAL STATEMENT)

Please complete the form with your details and upload your personal statement as a Word Document.